GET AHEAD

Writing a Statement of Purpose? Say NO to copying!

By Karan Gupta
February 21, 2007

SOP is not a new club or restaurant. Neither is it a welfare organisation called 'Save Our People'.

SOP is the acronym for Statement of Purpose. If you are applying for admissions overseas, most likely you will be sending a Statement of Purpose along with your application.

An SOP is an essay, which outlines your career goals, and aspirations, your reasons to choose a particular programme and degree, and so on.

It's your chance to communicate with them

Your SOP gives you a chance to 'talk' directly to the admission committee. Through the SOP, you can discuss with the admission committee any flaw in your application.

You can explain low grades, family issues and other personal problems. Keep in mind, that while you explain circumstances to the admission committee, it should not look like you are making excuses for your grades. It is imperative that you take responsibility for your actions.

It's not an essay

Most students get harried with just the thought that they have to write an essay. Universities are not looking for flowery language or great writing skills (unless of course, you are applying for a major in English or Writing) but instead are looking for students with clear and concise thoughts and who precisely know the reasons why they are applying to a particular university and major.

If your university does not provide a word limit, try to restrict your SOP to about 1,000 words. This is not a local university exam paper, where the more you write, the better your grades will be.

Dos and don'ts for your SOP

What about MBA applicants?

MBA applicants may not require a statement of purpose but instead may need essays to complete their applications. Business schools ask applicants to answer questions such as 'What are your short term and long term career goals?', 'Describe your teamwork and leadership activities', 'Describe an ethical dilemma you faced at work', etc. Many students decide to first write out an SOP tackling these questions. They then answer specific university questions from the SOP they have written.

Always write the statement of purpose or essays yourself. Never copy material from web sites or books. Also, beware of people who say they will write your essay for you. The GMAT and GRE both have essay writing components and universities will be able to tell a 'fake' SOP from your writing style. Similarly, the new SAT also has a writing component and colleges will be relying more on the essays you write as part of the standardised test.

"Sometimes, we're not sure how much help a student received in writing the essay. Using the tests' writing components will level the playing field for all applicants and help us ensure that each student writes his or her own essay without any help," says Deborah Smith, associate vice provost for Enrollment Services at Georgia Tech University. Universities such as Harvard, Notre Dame, Rice, Penn State, University of Texas and Ohio State University are also scheduled to follow the same system.

Soul searching is all you need

Being an international student, you most likely will not have the opportunity to visit your university and have a personal interview with the admission officers. Naturally, the essay is a vital component of your application packet. If you are not getting any additional help to write your essays or SOP, don't panic.

If you are clear about your career goals, why you want to attend a particular university and why you want to pursue a particular programme, you have nothing to worry about. Use this experience to do some soul searching. Identify why you really want to study abroad and what you plan to do after your education. Keep in mind what the University of Chicago admissions staff have to say -- "Err on the side of intellectual pretension than on the side of pure silliness."

Sample introductory paragraph of an SOP with review

My decision to pursue graduate study in the United States is underscored by my desire to be a part of the graduate programme at your institution. Purdue University offers the flexibility needed for such a vast and rapidly changing field. The research facilities and the faculty at the university are par excellent.

Review: While it's accepted wisdom that you have to suck up to the university, doing that in the very first paragraph isn't always seemly. This is something that all applicants should be careful about. Something else that's essential in these personal essays is to sound natural. In this paragraph, 'underscores' and 'par excellent' don't come across too well. This kind of awkward phrasing is best avoided.

I am applying for admission to the PhD program in Business Administration because I want a career in the research and teaching of management. In particular, I am interested in factors that affect the competitive performance of a business concern, and the manner in which changes in technology affect an organisation's structure, long-term business strategy, product development, manufacturing, supply chains, distribution network, information needs and standard systems. In order to gain an appreciation of these and related issues, it is essential for me to have a strong grounding in Economics, Supply Chain Management, and issues connected with Information Technology, as well as gain a General Management perspective.

Review: If you can capture your ambitions in a few words, this is the sort of beginning you want to shoot for. Far too many essays begin with cliched sayings or throwbacks to the author's childhood. However the pitch does get a bit queered in the next line. There are a few words about 'factors that affect …' and then an extremely long spiel about 'changes in technology affect' absolutely everything there is about an organisation. You don't have to be a business major to understand that things get a bit confusing since these unrelated ideas are presented in the same line. This results in things coming across in a rather unbalanced manner.

Source: www.Statementofpurpose.com

-- The author is an education consultant and can be contacted at kgc@karangupta.com
For more information visit
www.karangupta.com or www.report-ed.com.

Karan Gupta

NEXT ARTICLE

NewsBusinessMoviesSportsCricketGet AheadDiscussionLabsMyPageVideosCompany Email